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razor's end
written by xXlove+hateXx03:52 AM 3/18/05im in a puddle of blood,
ive been here for a while
and the blood and me are becoming as one.
i lie here rotting, left here all alone,
i donno how i got here,
the time wen i first picked up the razor
doesnt seem so near.
now its rusty and coated with dry blood,
not as crimson as it used to be,
but now the color of mud.
im lieing here waiting for someone to save me,
just to give myself a chance to be spared,
just if theres really any hope for me,
if anybody ever really cared.
then i realize, that theres no use in waiting,
no matter how much time i spend,
i take the razor for the last time
and the last thing i see
is the blood dripping from the razor's end. |
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just something i think about doing sometimes.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by d4rk_p03t (3-18-2005 - 04:57 AM)
| AMAZING POEM OMFG. your such a good writer. you can picture it and then make others do the same. i have been there and i know how you feel. keep writing. you did a badass job |
by xfadingmemoriesx (3-18-2005 - 09:24 AM)
| ouch, I pity the razor, LOL jk kay. it was a wonderful poem, I love the mud part. LOL, I'm insane don't mind me, I love all ya poems, good, keep it up. |
by TheUndeadBlackRose (3-26-2005 - 12:01 PM)
| I love it! Awesome keep writing! It's like fuckin' art. ~Grey |
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