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Better Off Dead
written by xXlove+hateXx04:01 AM 3/18/05My outlook on life hasnt really changed,
all my words are negative, my thoughts duranged,
it seems im less willing to do
the things i once loved to do,
it seems im less willing to prove my love to you.
nobody can save me,
im lost somewhere thats much to dark to see.
i opened up my heart to you,
but you sewed it back up,just like i expected u too.
im still under the same spell,
something that is too misunderstood to tell.
my cry for help cant be heard
no matter how loud i scream and shout,
im a prisoner in my own world, i cant be let out.
all my hope has gone away,
i hate everybody around me,
if only these thoughts wouldnt wanna stay.
so maybe its best if im left here alone,
or maybe its best if im just gone,
it doesnt really matter what everyone says,
cuz maybe im just better off dead. |
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im feeling very suicidal today
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Yammie (3-18-2005 - 04:03 AM)
| "Cause And Effect" myabe...or, "Aftermath" or something like that |
by HoRnY_pYrO (3-18-2005 - 04:08 AM)
| i think you should call it thoughts in my head! |
by Black_Rose252 (3-18-2005 - 04:12 AM)
| call it prisoner of depression that would rock. great poem. |
by Suicidal_Amber (3-18-2005 - 04:34 AM)
| Maybe you should call it "Screaming for help" or "Better Off Dead" or "Last chance for life" I dun'know. Good poem though :) - Amber - |
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