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† † God † †
written by naive_dark_death04:21 AM 3/18/05You came to my home
held your hand and took me off
brought me in the world i don't belong
a world that they call heaven
i never wanted to go there
i never wished that i'll meet You
never wanted to be on heaven
i never wanted to go with You
You were nailed in the cross to take our sins
why, why do you have to do that?
Get away from me!
I don't need you beside me
I only need myself
You can never change the way my life goes
Not ever!
Why did you have to take the sin that is ours
You're just trying to show that you're a fool
You were nailed in the cross, it's not because of us
It's because of the thing that you've done for yourself
I don't believe in prayers
I don't believe in confessions
I don't believe in forgiveness
I don't believe in you
Get away from me
I don't want you to come to my life
If you're the one who made me
Then you should take me now... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by just_nikki_21 (3-18-2005 - 04:27 AM)
by Suicidal_Amber (3-18-2005 - 04:30 AM)
| double wow lol. Thats hard hitting but for the peeps who do beleive in him, its a lil weird to read. Great expression of feeling though. - Amber - |
by Complicated_Life (3-18-2005 - 04:36 AM)
| triple wow lol but if u didnt like God that much... he wouldnt take you.. he ONLY takes the people who go to church and pray and worship him.. so if u really cant stand him like that then... you dont hve to worry cuz if thats how u feel... u arent going to Heaven.. but thats a good poem for people who dont believe in GOD and i agree that it does hit the believers HARD~! |
by ForEverLonley (3-18-2005 - 05:43 AM)
| ..amazing poem...i know how u feel..i'm Athiest.......good poem, keepit up!
*Renae |
by Drmsr_XXIII (3-19-2005 - 05:01 PM)
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