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» Poem: Coughing Up Blood
Coughing Up Blood
written by YouSmileAs_I_Die
05:08 AM 3/18/05
Stop me from thinking, stop me from feeling

Stop me from loving you, and stop my mind from reeling

I can feel your eyes against my back

And I'm praying that you'll put this gun to my head and blow me away at last

You say I'm crazy, I say I'll be fine in the end

"Will you tell me what's wrong?" you ask me, well now, that depends

Will you judge me? Will you look at me the same

After I've told you of my thoughts of death and my incessant pain?

What if I told you of the complex feelings I have that are the emotional equivilent to coughing up

Blood?

Would you be alright with me then?


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» Comments / Feedback
by bloodyangel1024 (3-19-2005 - 05:19 AM)
nice. thats all i can say cuz im speechless

by xXxSymbolicslashesxXx (3-19-2005 - 05:55 AM)
Thats an awesome poem :) deep n meaningful, love it well done xoxo

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