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Disowned ( PLeAsE CoMmEnT)
written by xXlove+hateXx07:04 AM 3/18/05The little girl walks the dangerous streets
like she does everyday.
her family disowned her,
or thats at least what they say.
her clothes are tattered, her hair isnt brushed,
her heart is shattered,
behind her eyes, she was visibly crushed.
nobody speaks to her,
nobody cares,
kids are told to stay away from her,
so they wouldnt dare.
folks arent concerned,
they want her off of their street,
shes obviously not wanted,
everyday of her life she finds herself in defeat.
she has nowhere to live,
the homeless shelter wouldnt take her in,
to everybody else, shes nothing but a sin.
though togay, if u read the news,
ud know that the very same girl
couldnt take it anymore.
i wouldnt blame her,
all the scrapes on her heart probley made it 2 sore.
so now, suddenly, everyone cares,
they didnt even know her,
but u still hear them crying,
"why couldnt she be spared?"
All except her family, they probably just forgot,
or maybe, she didnt kill herself,
she got shot* |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i put myself in the position of a disowned girl. most people i show this too dont get it, maybe u guys will
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (3-18-2005 - 09:19 AM)
| its beautiful, yet saddening. i love it. |
by hells_angel (3-18-2005 - 03:35 PM)
| its beautiful but it reminds me of how i used to feel. good and bad, but over all very lovely poem. |
by MidnightCurse (3-18-2005 - 03:45 PM)
| It's wonderful...I guess I'd feel the same way too... |
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