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|*Bad Judge*| (comment please!!)
written by xXlove+hateXx08:00 AM 3/18/05i tried to put my feelings
in a way so theyll make sense.
but i put it in a way that made every1 seem dense.
i dont wanna have contests on whos sadder,
when u cant say shit
cuz ur life was handed to u on a silver platter,
u make the worst of ur glamorous life,
u love to show people that ur best friend is ur knife,
dont judge me cuz u kno nothing about me,
cuz if ud see the real me, u wud be so sorry.
u steal every chance u have to make my life worse,
u settle every problem with one stupid curse.
everythings so easy for u,
yet u make it seem so tough,
i wouldnt mind trading shoes,
just one minute and ud have enough,
while id be living in luxury and a world of free stuff.
so think about what ur saying before u criticize me,
cuz id come back w/ much more too say,
that would make u finally see. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this poems about this one bitch that used to be my best friend. i kno her very well so i kno wut im talkin bout in here. i never let her get close enough to me tho.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (3-18-2005 - 09:25 AM)
| Burn that guy! Anyway, yeah awesome poem, as usual, I know I'm not good with comments. xP |
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