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Hollow
written by xfadingmemoriesx09:21 AM 3/18/05You sleep,
but you know not how to dream.
You disbelieve,
things aren't always as they seem.
You walk,
but your feet are not in motion.
You swim,
but you've never seen the ocean.
Answer me this,
where will your life lead?
You plan every mistake,
does your paper heart bleed?
You may stand strong,
against the rising tide.
But what good is that,
when you've nothing held inside? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I don't think I ended this poem well, but, if you read it, thanks, and please leave a comment, and thanks again.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xXlove+hateXx (3-18-2005 - 09:25 AM)
| u write so many poems, and a masterpiece everytime, awesome poem! |
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