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Leaf's
written by Death Tone12:44 PM 3/18/05I stare at this leaf ascending towards its destination
It appears to be caught in a never ending spiral
A miniature tornado slowly develops in front of my eyes
I look in complete awe at the beauty
I find it truly amazing how something so insignificant can still bring so much joy
I stand in the middle of this tornado that is transcending around me
When I slowly raise my arms out I gain a tremendous sense of power
These leafs dancing both on and around me
I never thought in my wildest dreams that I would see anything of such magnificent
The thought of it still sends shivers down my spine
Maybe one day I will find something to rival natures beauty
Until that day arrives I will always have this day in my memory |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by juicycoolio (3-18-2005 - 12:45 PM)
| what has that got to do with the title? |
by Death Tone (3-18-2005 - 01:06 PM)
by Emma! (3-18-2005 - 03:16 PM)
| I wasn't disappointed even after the title...and well lets face it, that says alot. :P Well done son, it's amazing! |
by Death Tone (3-18-2005 - 07:31 PM)
| Thanks, its is quite sad that the only way to get people to view it is to put a name with a sexual inuendo in it |
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