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» Poem: "MY THOUGHTS" plzz coment
"MY THOUGHTS" plzz coment
written by respectme4whoiam18
07:29 PM 3/18/05
i was just sitting in my room
feeling all alone
becuz i dont got no one
i dont want people to feel bad for me
but i just dont feel as if im being loved
i mean not just my family
like actually having a b/f or g/f
cuz that doesnt come easy for me

i know theres other things to worry about
but i just feel like im missing something
and i want that feeling to go away

i dont know what i have to do no more
what am i sapposed to become so anerxic bitch(no affence to the people who are)
i dont think so
i wanna be who i truly am
and not someone who they want me to be

i get alot of compliments from alot of people
saying im a good person
but why is it so hard to fall in luv
i think i deserve that power.


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this is how im feeling this afternoon. :(

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by xIHurt4ux (3-18-2005 - 08:27 PM)
Don't ever feel like you have to change yourself just to be loved. If you're patient it will come your way. In my opinion it's better to wait for true love then to throw it all away for a guy/ girl that hardly knows you.

by Whisperthewind (3-18-2005 - 09:01 PM)
That's right. But you just mostly said kinda how i feel. (check my other poems out if you'd like to see exactly how I feel)

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