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» Poem: LoVe hUrTs (please leave comments)
LoVe hUrTs (please leave comments)
written by yorki_lass
10:56 PM 3/18/05
My tears are fallin
in the place we met
the times we had
ill never forget

my knees are weak
my hands are shakin
i whisper the words
my heart is breaking

the echos of our laughs
playing in my head
the dreams of our love
fills me with dread

see what i didnt know
that so called happy day
was that as quick as ur love came
its was gently took away

i didnt know
love was so bad
that wen it went
it left u so sad

i felt so hollow
like an emty hole
no longin for nothin
no place to go

i neva thort
ud leave me this way
all them promises
that with me ud stay

the nights i cried
the tears i shed
the prayers i whispered
from my very own bed

'please bring him back
ill do anything i swear
ill become a nun
ill lyk tony blair'

although i joke
and smile once more
ill never forget
the love he bore

I LOVE U MARTYN


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» Comments / Feedback
by last_only (3-18-2005 - 11:02 PM)
so good. it reminds me of my ex, the field we met in, is the field we broke up in :(

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