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» Poem: the lovely way you broke our hearts
the lovely way you broke our hearts
written by AngelAshes
11:06 PM 3/18/05
My lethal ignorance
on our last lovely dance
we lost all control
in darkness our hearts were swallowed whole
the end of us is all we wanted to prevent
now our love is all torn and bend
in the deep of our joy will we crwl
so in sweet sorrow will we not fall
your eyes let me kill all my panic
our beautiful elegy's always feel so sick
our memories were always dreamt
she can't remember how true love really felt


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» Comments / Feedback
by Xx_devangel_xX (3-27-2005 - 12:00 AM)
It's so deep and i love it.It really remind's me of how i felt not long ago.

by alone_in_my_head (4-19-2005 - 07:54 PM)
wow yeah i really liked this one...i can definatly see how much you like AFI through this! nice one!!!

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