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What is Love? (PLEASE COMMENT!!)
written by xXlove+hateXx11:58 PM 3/18/05what is love anyway?
a beautiful melody,
something that u dont have to have eyes to see.
like running through the grass barefoot,
an enchanting moment that u kno wont stay put.
a soft summer breeze,
the feeling when a long hug leaves,
but a simple missed beat can destroy a melody,
stepping on a snail in the grass
can leave u feeling slimy.
a summer breeze can be destroyed by harsh winds,
a beautiful thing like love can stop
no matter how much time u spend.
u left me here after a long hug,
one that felt so warm and snug.
it left me missing u more anyway,
even tho i kno that u'll be bak one day |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
notice ive been writing alot of poems about love lately?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by DutifulAngel (3-19-2005 - 12:00 AM)
| that waz a really good poem, and i totally got it! lol! anyways, it was totally awesum!!!! |
by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-19-2005 - 12:02 AM)
| Wow! I really liked the analogies, imagery, and descriptiveness of your poem! |
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