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ALL SUICIDAL PEOPLE READ THIS-LEAVE COMM
written by yorki_lass12:18 AM 3/19/05to all the many people
that want to end there lives
stop and read this poem
and then ull realise
that life is what u make it
its no one elses fault
u can jus walk away
and lead them to a holt
you cant jus take away
what was luckily given 2 u
think bout all them babies
dat neva got the chance to
think of all the souls
that were sadly taken back
and neva got the chance
to feel the happiness to lack
think off all the people
dat cant do the things you can
thatd give there left arm
to shout 'IM UR FAN'
dont take for granted
what god has given u
god gave me a sister
she was taken too
she was a little baby
no older than a week
we barely even knew her
and still rest we seek
she shed a little tear
a smile from above
then slowly she was taken
we sent with her so much love
i can still feel her now
and hear her little laugh
id loved to ave changed her
and give her a little bath
ill never forget my sister
and the happines she gave
if only for a little while
now she rests in her tiny grave
you see the point im makin
she never had her chance
to prove she cud be successful
to go to russia spain or france
im sure u wuda lyked her
coz she wuda known
the greatness life can give
id ave taught her as shed grown
dont get me wrong i know ur pain
i felt it when she left
but i stoped one day and thought
at least i am left
now as u go from this poem
and reach for that knife
i know its bad now
but through it you must strife
thank you for ur time
and i hope one day youll seek
that happiness your owed
and the voice that u will speak.
good luck to u all and so much love |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by brokenxsmile (3-19-2005 - 12:25 AM)
| awesome poem. Love the point you got across. So sorry for your loss. Nice rhymes, but spelling could use improvement. I love the poem, though, nice work:) |
by xXlove+hateXx (3-19-2005 - 12:26 AM)
| that was really good! sorry bout ur sis.. :( |
by yorki_lass (3-19-2005 - 12:26 AM)
| please leave comments-id love to tell my sister when i leave her flowers tomorrow...love to u all and remember...u can be strong xxx |
by The_sad_girl (3-19-2005 - 12:27 AM)
| Wow.......Thats...........amazing.
You did great job |
by *Dark*Emo*Neko*Chick* (3-19-2005 - 12:27 AM)
by Unlike...u (3-19-2005 - 12:32 AM)
| WTF??!! its an ok poem but learn how to spell please....and what the hell do you know about peoples problems?! Just shut the hell up unless you know what you are talking about...gezz....annoying ppl like you that post poems like this piss me off....im sorry but you have no clue what your talking about |
by yorki_lass (3-19-2005 - 12:37 AM)
| i have a biological dad that doesnt want to know me he walked in to my life then out agen 6months later, i have a dad i grew up with that raped my mum locked her in the cellar for days on end and that beat me so much i was put in intesive care, a sister that died,2 brothers i havent seen in 6 years,i was bullied till i was 10years old to the point i took 40 paracetamol luckily my grandma walked in and took me to hospital,i have 2 sisters and a brother to my biological dad that i have met 2wice so dont fukin tell me i have had it easy!!! u dont know me mate and u dont know what i am about, and i typed it quick and from the heart so i didnt care about spellings thank you |
by Unlike...u (3-19-2005 - 12:42 AM)
| meh that wasnt my point i wasnt saying you had it easy its just the way i read the poem it sounded more like you were telling people how to live their lives..... |
by yorki_lass (3-19-2005 - 12:53 AM)
| i would never do that!!! but i do think everyone is precious, and shouldnt let there misfortunes ruin there chances.read my other poems and u will understand i have been misfortunate and all i am doing is trying to tell people you are not alone-if anyone wants to talk to me sexy_lexa@hotmail.co.uk dont be scared i am only 14 lol x xx x x x |
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