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» Poem: I Should've...But I Couldn't
I Should've...But I Couldn't
written by just_nikki_21
01:17 AM 3/19/05
I should've loved you more,
I should've held you tighter,
I should've kissed you more,
I should've tried harder,
I should've done all those things you wanted.

I wanted to love you more,
I wanted to hold you so tight,
I never wanted to stop kissing you,
I tried so hard to make us work,
But I couldn't be perfect for you.

Loving you more would've killed me,
I felt my soul slipping away as I held you close,
Your breath sucking the life from me as we kissed,
Trying so hard to remain myself,
Your perfection tainting my awareness.


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it might only make sense to me...but oh well

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