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written by xXlove+hateXx02:03 AM 3/19/05i wanna tell u something
but im afraid everything will change.
i wanna tell u that i love u,
but u might look at me strange.
ull skip town and use a disguise,
so i wont tell u, cuz then ull be too surprised,
we have a dilemma, is what i hear u say,
then i dont say anything,
cuz im wondering if u really feel that way.
so now im afraid to tell u how i feel,
and i wanna make sure that this love is really real.
but if i would tell u something,
would u ever wanna talk to me again?
cuz really ive loved u for a long time,
to be exact, since i was ten.
theres so many possibilities
if i would tell u what makes me feel so lame
or worst possibility of all, is u wont feel the same. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by yorki_lass (3-19-2005 - 02:06 AM)
| good again lol same old same old but u really do ave a natural talent please read my poems and leave feedback-be honest usfull critism is good 4 me |
by di3dtrying (3-19-2005 - 02:12 AM)
| thats so true for me and it rox love your poems!!!!!! |
by lilbych (3-19-2005 - 02:15 AM)
| it was a good poem ... keep it up |
by xfadingmemoriesx (3-19-2005 - 03:27 AM)
| goooood, ^^ something like mine, but better. x] love it. |
by PbNj88 (3-19-2005 - 03:41 AM)
| I really like this poem .its good ..keep it up :-) |
by fairyleena (3-19-2005 - 04:03 AM)
| Awsome work! I relate! please some of my poems and cooment/feedback on it and dont be shy on telling the trueth please. |
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