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» Poem: in my eyes(plz comment)
in my eyes(plz comment)
written by dark_child07
03:57 AM 3/19/05
i thought i was over you,
but now i am not so sure,
i just need to know,
if your love is pure.
i tried to force myself to feel something,
that i thought i didnt anymore,
but i am starting to believe that,
i feel now the way i did before.
i am so confused,
i wish i knew what to do,
but the truth is,
i think i might still love you.
but i will step off,
no more games, no more lies,
even if i do still love you,
i will hide the love reflecting back on you in my eyes.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
yes, danni....u got ur wish, i wrote a poem for cory...i think i might love him...i am not sure, i am so confused...so lost!!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by xXlove+hateXx (3-19-2005 - 04:03 AM)
aww, u poor baby, ah, i hate it when that happens. but the best thing u could do is just wait a while and see if these feelings will last, at a point, u will be sure. GREAT POEM!! and good luck!:)

by forbiddenangelofdarkness (3-19-2005 - 04:14 AM)
pretty look at and comment on my poems plz

by acdcgurl361 (3-19-2005 - 04:16 AM)
thats so sweet

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