» Poem: U Could Save Me-:SHORT: PLEASE COMMENT!! |
U Could Save Me-:SHORT: PLEASE COMMENT!!
written by xXlove+hateXx04:01 AM 3/19/05im lieing here all alone,
u could save me if u wanted to,
u left me here in my own quiet zone.
ill be lieing here as long as im alive,
im only accompanied by my precious bloody knives.
if u decide to rescue me, u'll kno where i am.
but im not gonna depend on u,
cuz i kno u dont give a damn. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (3-19-2005 - 04:11 AM)
wow it's good even tho it's short. |
by LayLaa (3-19-2005 - 05:09 AM)
Damn that was really good...do you have more? |
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