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Can't you see I love you?
written by SoulOfADreamer04:17 AM 3/19/05Give me the chance
To say,"I do."
Give me the passion
To keep lovin' you
Give me the inspiration
To make this a song
Give me acceptance
Of my rights and wrongs
Tell me you feel it
I wanna feel it too
Don't be afraid
To say," I love you"
If you could just say that
You'd set my heart free
Then maybe I could say it back
If not, just leave me be |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
that one was actually hard to make cause I don't think much of my poetry and I've never really been in love...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (3-19-2005 - 04:22 AM)
| wow, for a person who've never been in love, that's one fab poem. |
by (guest) (3-28-2005 - 04:01 PM)
| i loved it! this is the same way i feel about my b/f. he never says he loves me, but i say it to him cause i know he's gonna hurt me and i'm thinking about going back to my g/f bu ti dunno. i got a lot to think about and it hurts cause i dunno what to do! please help. thanks for helpin me realize something.
*love jen* |
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