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» Poem: i dream of a new day *PLEASE COMMENT!!*
i dream of a new day *PLEASE COMMENT!!*
written by xXlove+hateXx
04:59 AM 3/19/05
sometimes im alone, and its hard for me to breathe,
sometimes it feels like the only way
to get away is to let me bleed.
but i look at the past
and i realize that things reallly do change,
and maybe someday my thots wont b so duranged,
i love to dream
about what i will become if i end up being ok,
i think thats the only thing that kept me alive today,
and maybe, just maybe, my family will change.
somedays i think that we're doin ok,
but then as i start to think that,
out comes another thing thats strange.
but if everything does change,
ill be so proud,
ill be proud to see all i can be outside of the clouds.
So while i sit and cry myself away,
i can just dream of a new day


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a very hopeful poem

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by xfadingmemoriesx (3-19-2005 - 05:01 AM)
yeah its very hopeful, and beautiful. i love it.

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