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Still(plz comment)
written by dark_child0705:21 AM 3/19/05the day the sun falls from the heavens,
and the earth goes up in flame,
I will still love you,
nothing will change.
when the stars shine their last gleam,
and the earth falls silent and dark,
i will still love you,
like i have from the very start.
when the rains no longer bring thunder,
and the earth goes dry,
I will still love you,
you will still be mine.
the day you find someone better than me,
and i know you will,
i will watch you go,
but continue to love you still! |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by StupidLilPoser (3-19-2005 - 09:10 PM)
| i loove it so0o much!! i hope u dont mind that put it in my pro.. but ur names under it as author.. ur a great poet ples keep it up n dont let ne one bring u downn... |
by dyingday (3-19-2005 - 10:06 PM)
| An amazing poem. It is really good. Keep up the good work. |
by Ev0l_sin#TRIP (3-19-2005 - 10:58 PM)
| its totally deep i love much!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
by poetic_tragity_x (4-8-2005 - 01:15 PM)
| Awesome.
Does your name happen to be Amy?
Cause if is...
Then i know you!!
Yayayayay!!
Cause the screen name sounds like the whole darkchild907 thing.
But if not
Good poem.
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by poetic_tragity_x (4-8-2005 - 01:16 PM)
| MY poems(to the chick that may be Amy or whoever else) are under "none" and its Poetic_Tragity_x |
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