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A Fake
written by depressions_slave05:25 AM 3/19/05You say I'm a fake,
But I am there when you awake,
You call up to me 'mistress save me',
But I say to you 'how dare you let this be'.
As I walk away, Going my own way,
you shout at me, 'your a fake',
I turn and say, 'Then why was I the only one who waited for you to wake?' |
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» Comments / Feedback | by naughtylilgurls05 (3-19-2005 - 05:27 AM)
this is an ok poem it's now that great and tha only reason i think that is bcuz it is kinda confusing .... but it was ok for what it was....well good work |
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