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Life Without You (PLEEEEEZ COMMENT)
written by xXlove+hateXx
07:08 AM 3/19/05
its hard being here without u,
but i guess i just have it face the fact
that theres nothin i can do,
i can hardly believe im able to live and breathe
when ur not with me by my side.
i love u more than words can say
but it feels like a part of me just died.
u left me here with just memories, how could u?
it pains me so much,cuz i kno ull find someone new.
its hard not to cry and feel torn,
but it feels like all thats left to do is just mourn.
in the day,
im lost in thoughts of u that cut my heart so deep,
and in the night, i cant even sleep.
but in my dreams, u seem so near,
when im awake, ur not here.
all these thoughts are never resting,
i have to go on, its probably the best thing.
ill be thinking of u, as the days go by,
its hard not to, no matter how hard i try.
ill be living my life without u,
i hope that ill be seeing u again, like we always do.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i Miss my love!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ COMMENT!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by xfadingmemoriesx (3-19-2005 - 07:17 AM)
aww, it's sweet. and good.

by XzXwatchXmeXBreakXzX (3-19-2005 - 07:17 AM)
I liked it... I think it was VERY good actually! I know how you feel! :)

by vampie_coon (3-19-2005 - 07:21 AM)
i liked it.. :D

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