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One Day She Fell In Love*PLEASE COMMENT!
written by xXlove+hateXx10:32 AM 3/19/05one day she fell in love
with the man that was easy for her to adore,
she felt like fainting around him,
every part of her body so sore.
just as she suspected, he loved her too.
and just in a few moments he chose her to woe.
their few years together were not easy,
they both fought and yelled til it made them queasy
it seemed they have lost all their love,
they only touch when they both shove.
one day the man just had enough
of all the times they fought.
while she was asleep,
he pointed to gun at her and shot.
he dragged her to the back of his truck,
there was nobody out there looking, to his luck.
he drove her to a cemetery,
but while he wasnt looking
the woman came back alive,
when he saw it was very scary.
right then he died of fright,
the woman buried him while it was still night.
before she left she spit on his grave,
see, in this story, the woman is saved. |
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bored as a jew on x-mas! PLEASE COMMENT!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by tearsofblood (3-19-2005 - 10:46 AM)
| whoa...gave me the goosebumps...i likey...lol...no really its good=) |
by *xoxo_Heiress* (3-19-2005 - 12:46 PM)
| That was awesome. Not only was the rhyming great, but the plot was awesome. A true inspiration. The ending tied it together well!
Keep writing, and I'll keep reading and commenting!
Love always,
~*~Alexis~*~ |
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