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You Smile As I Die
written by YouSmileAs_I_Die11:19 AM 3/19/05I never thought I'd fall this far
I'm done with wishing on every single black star
For your love and for you touch
Because it seems like I was asking for just a little too much
So now I've got this blade against my wrist, and you to blame
For costing me so many tears and so much pain
I raise my arms high, offering myself to the Father as a Holy Sacrifice
And I can feel Death creep through my veins as cold as ice
The blood pours forth in a tidal wave of relieving bliss
Finally I'm through with life and all of this
I look up as the world slips into darkness, passing me by and by
And the last thing I see is your picture, and how you smile as I die |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is a revision of a poem i wrote quite a while ago...it's not exactly the same, but the last line is, hence the namesake.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by tearsofblood (3-19-2005 - 11:30 AM)
| i really love this...dont kill urself...xoxoxoxo...ur 2 good of a poet...seriously i love your stuff, and i've slit 2, :( :) :..( |
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by xHunniBunnix (3-20-2005 - 10:40 PM)
| WOW!! I ENVY U! your such a gd poet! I love it! gd work chuck but plz dnt kill ur self *mwah* xx |
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