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Dear Daddy-please leave comments
written by yorki_lass
05:26 PM 3/19/05
dear daddy,

do you ever sit and stare
where the bruises were?
wonder how they just went,
the pain, too hard to bear.
I no you're answer's no,
cause it just wasn't you,
you used excuses like,
i didn't see them through.
'I do it cause i love you'
You used to say to me,
'But you always make me angry'
I used to sit so quietly.
Too scared to make a sound,
In fear of your fist,
one smack was enough,
but instead there was a list.
Christmas was a happy time,
You were mostly at the pub
Mum would try her best,
But quietly she'd blub.
She'd make her self look pretty,
to me she was a star,
she covered every bruise
and every other scar.
She would hold her head up proudly,
and kept her chapped mouth shut,
but now your secrets out,
Im not scared of you anymore,
you're nothing but a lout.
So Ian Mallinson, wherever you are
here your named and shamed
for the life you gave me
and for the life ive gained

From
Lexa
PS - ROT IT HELL 'DADDY'


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» Comments / Feedback
by CrYsTaLZ_05 (3-19-2005 - 05:31 PM)
its deep is this poem true?

by punkprincesskonstantine (3-19-2005 - 06:17 PM)
wow, thas really deep shit hon. good job. i like it

by yorki_lass (3-19-2005 - 07:10 PM)
yes its tru x and thank you x

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