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In Pieces
written by YouSmileAs_I_Die09:37 PM 3/19/05No one wants to be alone
Bones can be crushed, hearts can be shattered but which hurts more?
Pour out your soul and watch it be ripped apart
Start over again only to go through the same shit
This life wasn't mine to choose, I was just took what was given to me
Be yourself after following them for so long to see if you're still you
Do you even know who we are, will you remember us?
Trust in no one, or learn it the hard way
Lay under the stars as they trickle down alone at night
Write your pain in the sky and leave it there to rot
Not my will but yours be done instead
Head down the road towards the end
Mend my broken heart or leave it here in pieces |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this one i rhymed the last word in each line with the first word in the second...if that makes any sense.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Tel (3-19-2005 - 09:42 PM)
| it makes plent of sence...i dint notice that when i was reading it....
i loved ur poem |
by death_stalker (3-19-2005 - 09:43 PM)
| i really like this. its deep and it makes alot of sense. keep it up! |
by Ev0l_sin#TRIP (3-19-2005 - 09:58 PM)
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