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I Smile
written by MansonSlave12:23 AM 3/20/05I feel like dying, but inthe presents of others I smile,
Oh no so unloved, unwanted but I smile,
Mad at the world wishing they'd burn but i smile,
Heart has been broken now jet black, eyes red from crying water falls of acid tears, walking dead miserable but I smile. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-20-2005 - 02:13 AM)
| dude you sound just like my boy friend right before i got with him. he was always complaining about how no one loves him and his " black bleeding soul" and how lonely and miserable he is but the way i see it, look at him now he's all in love and happy with his life and him self. so i guess im saying to try not to worry about it cause eventually ur time would come too to be happy otay ;) |
by Nug (3-20-2005 - 01:36 PM)
| i am the girl you know boys always have to leave. it's a curse.... wow your poem is so cool |
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