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sweet sweet misery (EDITED VERSION)
written by xXlove+hateXx04:53 AM 3/20/05dispair greets me by the time i get out of bed,
shame leads me as i walk to school,
by the time its gone i donno where ive been led.
sorrow walks me through my classes,
if anyone asks it tells me to tell people that im fine.
loneliness comes around lunch,
bitterness finds him to be quite devine.
negativity hangs around after school
the air around it is poisonous
but it forces me to inhale.
hopelessness decides to come
around the time that homework begins to fail.
when it decides to leave,
Pain looks for me for the the rest of the day
and somehow it always finds me.
by the time i go to sleep,
im taken over by sweet misery |
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» Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (3-21-2005 - 08:50 AM)
holy!! it's great!! I'll be the one losing in the competitions xP. it's really good. keep it up! |
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