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Ungrateful Embrace
written by KillTheBeautifulPeople
06:01 AM 3/20/05
Her glass blue eyes met mine at the break of dawn,
For one cold moment, I thought I knew her
For one ungrateful embrace, I thought
I loved her.

She was my friend, a lost lover
found at last in the middle of nowhere
The trust I failed to recognized never
existed underneath her beauty.
For one last Ungrateful Embrace,
I felt as though i was frozen in a matter of seconds

My life has taken a deadly toll for her
hungry soul. She used me for love
and I cannot feel my dying emotions.
She killed the trust i had for her when I saw
her poison my friend with her lips.

For the last ungrateful embrace, I will
make sure she will never see the light of day again after betraying me with my best friend.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This poem is referring to my ex-girlfriend Kristal who cheated on me with a friend. She tore my heart like ripping a piece of paper in no time at all.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Starry_Nyght (3-20-2005 - 06:03 AM)
Not all girls are like that. Some are, some aren't. My ex-best friend slept with my then-boyfriend. It sux. Big time.

by left2die (3-20-2005 - 06:11 AM)
that was really good dude i wish i could write like that

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