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I hate you
written by just_nikki_2106:12 AM 3/20/05Always I hate you,
Forever and ever Hatred,
And you hate me too. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-21-2005 - 03:43 AM)
by ohwellwatevernvm (3-22-2005 - 08:36 PM)
| your poetry isnt so poetic |
by NIRVANAGRL1994 (3-24-2005 - 12:44 AM)
| UR PEOTRY IS GREA CUZ U FELL IT U DNT CARE WAT PPL SAY ITS JUST WATS ON UR MIND THTS A REALL POET. U DNT NEED TO RYME ESPECIALLY IN HAIKUS I LIKE IT |
by just_nikki_21 (3-24-2005 - 05:58 AM)
by (guest) (3-25-2005 - 03:57 AM)
| thes stoery socked munkey bolls!!!!
eat wusnt lung enouf!!!
sorie im irish!!!go leprican go!!! mi wunts mi guld bock!!! i mate!!! |
by just_nikki_21 (3-25-2005 - 08:03 AM)
| its a haiku 5-7-5 you know? ....nevermind |
by xXxInsaneInsidexXx (3-25-2005 - 09:07 PM)
by punkchick135 (3-26-2005 - 06:16 PM)
| it's cool, not a usual haiku. it was good
later |
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