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Honest lies (leave a comment!)
written by di3dtrying06:36 AM 3/20/05Why does everything seem so wrong?
I try to keep a good face,
I do my best to stay strong.
Its just so hard when youre constantly feeling like you have to lie.
About your life and about the times you cry.
I feel like I should hide all my pain and everything i keep buried in my soul.
Do you know how exactly this feels?
Ive never felt something this cold.
You might say i know exactly how you feel.
But you never will, at least not for real.
Youll never have the pain i hide deep within me.
Not until you look thriugh my eyes and see what they see.
My heart just feels so empty and so full of pain,
and even sometimes my fear hurts and lonliness builds up and makes the anger twards myself hard to maintain. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (!IHateMyLife!) (3-21-2005 - 12:58 PM)
| Ur poem was the ROCK!! u seem really talented, i dont know why no one else has commented. be strong dude........ |
by _acceptable_loss_ (3-22-2005 - 10:46 PM)
by loving_you (3-23-2005 - 05:17 AM)
| you wrote a really good poem. |
by (guest) (3-23-2005 - 04:19 PM)
| ur a great poetry writer and u seen to be in alot of pain i feel sorry 4 u |
by (guest) (3-25-2005 - 03:58 AM)
| this poem is really good it reminds me of my own stuff u probly won't believe this but i do know wut ur goin thru cuz sometimes i feel the same way email me sometime: moto_punk54@yahoo.com
xxxheatherxxx |
by loveUorLoveMe? (3-25-2005 - 06:01 PM)
| like some people who's read this poem im gonna say,i can feel ya on this one. this wasa great poem that i've read today. keep writing!!
**Emily** |
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