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Your Past (Comment Plz)
written by ScoutingEagle07:57 AM 3/20/05Your past, It does haunt me
Not knowing why
Your feelings are reserved
Why do I try
Searching your soul for answer to arrive
To no avail
My feelings do swell
Not to escape me
Until I can tell
If only you'd show me
If only you'd brake down
Would you tell me why
Maybe I'd understand
Maybe I'll cry
But nothing will help till you tell me why
By: Ronnie Ludke |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by VinnieG (3-20-2005 - 08:05 AM)
| this is really good, i can relate to it my girlfriend is always depressed and wont tell me why |
by (guest) (3-30-2005 - 04:44 PM)
| that was really good
Laurie |
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