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the path
written by omegadrax08:07 AM 3/20/05tonight i set myself on the path of truth
to be the man that you've always needed
let us go back to the days of our youth
as i treat you as you are meant to be treated
tonight i set myself on the path of love
to be the man that you've always wanted
driven by a spirit and power from above
to exorcize mental ghosts that have haunted
tonight i set myself on the path of devotion
to you and only you, i recommit my heart
let us hold each other and move in slow motion
in a neverending quest for a fresh start
and as i put myself on this path where i belong
i see that you have been waiting here all along |
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i love my wife so damn much
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| » Comments / Feedback | by GeishaGirl (3-20-2005 - 08:13 AM)
by writingpoetry_inadarkroom (3-30-2005 - 03:04 AM)
| That's awesome, way better than my sonnets. |
by CLC_RockGirl (4-1-2005 - 06:21 PM)
| Iambic pantantary? You almost have it keep it up remember five feet in a line |
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