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» Poem: Disturbed.
Disturbed.
written by Josh_x
08:37 AM 3/20/05
Clutching a rose
Letting the thorns pierce your skin
Pushing them in deeper
Smiling at the pain
Watching as the blood pours
Licking the thorns
Slicing your tongue
You cannot feel pain
You have been too empty all along
The taste of rust filling your mouth
The best taste you know
I'm not crazy
I'm just disturbed
But i fucking love the pain
It numbs what i feel inside
Call me insane
Call me sick
I don't fucking care
Your shit won't phase me
Tears will never fall from my eyes
I am already dead inside.


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» Comments / Feedback
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-20-2005 - 08:49 AM)
Dont you just love it when you feel so numb...its weird. I guess so much emotional pain makes physical pain absolutely nothing. Nice job. -CaSsY

by mishy0077 (3-20-2005 - 09:40 AM)
whoa, i love it, ur good at this!

by Nug (3-20-2005 - 02:06 PM)
But i fucking love the pain. i think i feel the same

by blackthorn (3-20-2005 - 02:16 PM)
Tis good and I know how you feel!

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