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» Poem: I'm Lost
I'm Lost
written by xHunniBunnix
11:21 AM 3/20/05
I'm lost at sea,
With waves of sand,
The blazing sun,
Of the desert land.

Snowflakes swirling,
Slowly down,
In a whirlpool where,
I slowly drown.

Sea, Sand,
Sun and Snow,
Where am I now?
Where do I go?

Rain comes graceful,
Hail beats down,
Sliding swiftly,
Towards the ground.

Thunder rolls,
With lightning merciless,
When it hits me,
I'm helpless.

Rain, Hail,
Thunder and Lightning,
Is there any point,
In trying?


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» Comments / Feedback
by mishy0077 (3-20-2005 - 11:23 AM)
good one

by tearsofblood (3-20-2005 - 12:09 PM)
i seem to like it =)

by Nug (3-20-2005 - 01:12 PM)
yep, this is what i like. it could be a song

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