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Bitch - plz comment i need 2 no wat 2 do
written by xHunniBunnix05:07 PM 3/20/05I've had enough,
You say he should burn in Hell?
Well fuck it, fuck it all!
I hope you fuckin burn aswell!
You ruined me,
You ruined it all,
U can't get me out,
I'm too deep in the pool!
She's a bitch I hate her!
How can he possible love you?
You took my love,
Your a lie, thats all you do!
I want you to suffer,
I want you dead,
Just like I am,
Without him I'm dead |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by shredded_kitty (3-20-2005 - 05:09 PM)
| aww thats a really gd poem, i know what ur going through my poem who is dedicated to wayne....its the same about me and him...good luck hun xXXx kitty xXXx |
by (guest) (3-20-2005 - 05:37 PM)
| if u truly love sum1 u will nt give up, keep going untill u solve the problem, love is a puzzle, if u lose the puzzle u will b hurt, u finish the puzzle an u will b happy, while if u stop in the middle, u will watch others pass by an finish ahead of u |
by not_alive_nor_dead (3-20-2005 - 07:59 PM)
| i am going thru the same thing.. read my poems and you'll see... well i still love my someone even if it has been 3 months.... i learned i could still love him but let him go at the same time.. and that is waht my poetry is for.. ime iving up life and yet ime giving up death and at the same time ime giving up love... so what ime saying is.. maybe give him up but not 100% and then maybe if faith is.. you'll get him back.. u don't have to but hey.. it's a try.. i love your poetry aswell keep it up! |
by (guest) (3-23-2005 - 08:34 AM)
| kill that stupid, fucking, lesbianic whore! !!DAVE!! |
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