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THAT SLUT TOOK YOU -plz leave comments
written by yorki_lass05:18 PM 3/20/05why did u leave me?
what did i do?
is it so bad?
that i love you?
what did she have?
small bum big breasts?
what is it she had?
that made her best?
i hate her you know
for being what you need
is it her love?
that you do heed?
She should rot and burn
for what shes done
i cunt give a crap
if shes the one
does she make you laugh?
does she make you cry?
I hope one day
shell say goodbye
only then youll know
this hurt inside
but dont you worry
ill be by your side |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Beaniepops (3-20-2005 - 05:22 PM)
| llama!! What is the point in writing this poem? It is just irrelevent... |
by yorki_lass (3-20-2005 - 05:23 PM)
| coz i wanted to and the idea came in to my head |
by xxxvampire_loverxxx (3-20-2005 - 05:24 PM)
| don't you hate it when a bitch tries to or does take ur man?! this one bitch that's my bf's ex gf stole his hoodie and said that she was going out with him. i called the whore and bitched at her. but now what really sux is that he got arrested yesterday because someone he was with in a car that he didn't know had drugs and everyone's stories are changing and it's so confusing. i've been with him for 4 months and now i feel like i don't know him at all. i feel like shit because of everything that's going on. we haven't talked about what happened yesterday but i have a feeling that it's not good. i've tried calling him but no one answered. anyway, good poem, i really liked it. |
by depressed_lil_angel (3-20-2005 - 05:27 PM)
| Great poem i really liked it |
by Beaniepops (3-20-2005 - 05:32 PM)
| Thanks for the irrelevant life story xxxvampire_loverxxx |
by mystery15 (3-20-2005 - 05:34 PM)
| Iknow how u Feel my bf of 3 years left me for my best friend !!! I guess they were together for the past yearbut i was to blind to see what she was doing to me . and that reall pisses me off !! |
by yorki_lass (3-20-2005 - 05:35 PM)
| beaniepops do one, vampire lover-be strong hun the right man wil make god damn sure you know him well and hell deserve you aswell xxx |
by *esha* (3-20-2005 - 05:42 PM)
| great poem, i loved it
i feel the same as you
well done keep writing xxx |
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