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dear daddy part 2 plz comment
written by yorki_lass05:32 PM 3/20/05Dear daddy,
youre out there arent you
knowin what youve done
the bruises gone and faded
the pain it stil lives on
you showed no care in what you did
to me your just a beast
jus a thought for your special day
soon your heart will ceast
one day you will approch a girl
with a smile upon her face
then shell look you up and down
and put you in your place
youre no man to me you know
just shit on my shoe
one day when your dead and gone
to your name theyll say 'who?'
youll sleep tonight im sure you will
ill make it my plan you do
so close your eyes my daddy dear
its time your spirit flew
ROT IN HELL 'DADDY' |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xHunniBunnix (3-20-2005 - 05:42 PM)
| You really hate your dad don't you? I can't relate to you that much cos I love my dad but it's a great poem! Keep it up chuck xx |
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