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step-dad-plz comment
written by yorki_lass
05:55 PM 3/20/05
my step-dad hes an angel
although we have our rows
at least he never beats me
and my hate he dont arouse

hes there through my tears
and when im feeling low
he tells me that he loves me
and that hell never go

my other dad he beat me
till i was black and blue
it took a while to trust
this other daddy too

mum said he was a good man
not here to make me hate
and thank you mummy darling
this daddy i do rate

please daddy please dont go
dont change like hed done
i dont know what id do
your daddy number 1


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» Comments / Feedback
by Xx_mistik_xX (3-20-2005 - 05:56 PM)
i like it, ur lucky that u have a stepdad that doesnt do that like the first one, i hope hes forever good to you.

by Beaniepops (3-22-2005 - 11:32 AM)
U r obsessed with ur bloody parents...

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