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» Poem: fly--- comments???
fly--- comments???
written by teejavus
06:04 PM 3/20/05
i wish that i
was a fly
so that i could bug you
all day just disturb you
thats what i wanna try


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
just gettin bored i guess

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-20-2005 - 06:10 PM)
i didnt no u were such a disturbin element!!!!! ankana

by teejavus (3-20-2005 - 06:18 PM)
well i guess thats what i am

by whatShouldUsBe (3-20-2005 - 06:23 PM)
Thats pretty cool Lol

by (guest) (3-20-2005 - 07:59 PM)
hehehehe.nice one.

by sweetkitty73090 (3-20-2005 - 08:07 PM)
cool

by Tigress92 (3-20-2005 - 10:45 PM)
funny real funny.

by RoCkLoVeR202 (3-21-2005 - 12:35 AM)
i liked it a lot very interesting topic

by pain+sex=good (3-21-2005 - 04:25 AM)
Not as good as some of your others but intriguing none the less.

by teejavus (3-21-2005 - 11:43 AM)
hey was gettin bored

by the_good_girl (3-21-2005 - 04:21 PM)
don't have tp try too hard..missed calls will do!

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