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We r losing him!(plz comment)
written by dark_child07
06:28 PM 3/20/05
I want so badly,
to stand up and say I told u so,
ur life is slipping away from you,
if ur not careful sooner or later u will go.
You promised u were careful,
that u wouldnt get hurt,
but it is eating away at ur body,
u r getting hurt.
I wanna laugh but I cant,
I wanna cry but I cant do that either,
I know I was right,
then why do I still wanna cry?
The drugs have consumed you,
you have become them,
I told my mom time and time again,
"we r losing him."
But I am only a child,
so nobody listened to me,
even though I know what I am talking about,
Just once listen to somebody.
Maybe this is what u needed,
to wake you up from this nightmare,
maybe all u needed was a little faith,
and for someone to finally care.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is for my step-dad, Ron, who has a serious drug problem...HE found out the other day that 90% of his body had been consumed and if he would have waited any longer, he would have died!!!

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by doobz (3-20-2005 - 07:21 PM)
wow. this touched me

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