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Too Much Pressure To Take
written by (!IHateMyLife!)08:29 PM 3/20/05I'm falling so fast,
I don't think i'll last,
the pain floods my vains,
as i fly through the rain,
Could u catch me?,
Could u save me?,
No, all u want to do is rape me.
Nobody will ever know how i feel,
my life is ending,
it is unreal,
the grief to know how u are using me,
i know now how u abuse me.
i think i know u have so much power,
but thats Ok, i'll be dead in an hour. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
All i want to do is break free from his overruling clutches, so to break free, i'm usin death as the answer.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by di3dtrying (3-21-2005 - 06:20 AM)
| good poem and god help you if you have been raiped?
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by jaxxy26 (3-29-2005 - 07:35 PM)
| suicide? bad idea. if u die, he wins. find another way. |
by lonelyshadowangel (4-4-2005 - 12:35 AM)
| Right, you need to find an edge over him to bring him down. You can't let him win. good poem;) |
by intearsforever (4-21-2005 - 01:40 AM)
| Please don't take suicide as an answer..it really isn't, this life holds so much once you get out of his grasp, trust me. Just please, maybe do something about it, just don't let him win by dying...Feel free to add me to msn or something, I am always here to talk..please though, suicide isn't an answer. xxx, jessi
msn: isolated_angel72@hotmail.com |
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