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--Where The Sky Is Blue--(suicide note)
written by DaMaGeD08:48 PM 3/20/05Of all the things i've done wrong,
And all the ways i dont belong,
All the times i've been so upset,
This is the one thing i dont regret,
I know it wasnt meant to be,
I know it's something you cant see,
I dont want to break your heart,
But this time i have fallen apart,
There's a cloud waiting for me,
A golden sunset on silver sea,
And someone there to take my hand,
If only you could understand,
All i want is to stay here and live,
But i've given that i can give,
In this grey and black, black and grey,
I am slowly fading away,
I want to be where the sky is blue,
You know i will never stop loving you. |
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erm...an old suicide note
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| » Comments / Feedback | by doobz (3-20-2005 - 08:51 PM)
| seriously. u r brilliant. u no i luv ur work |
by not_alive_nor_dead (3-20-2005 - 09:00 PM)
| amazing.. i love your poetry.. i you have the ryming gift that i lack... you r brilliant!! |
by xXxpsycedelicpsycolxXx (3-20-2005 - 09:13 PM)
| OMFG very impressive! i love it...i can feel it and i dig it! thats a very good one! i mean wow..thats one bad poem dude very very bad ass...cool...no ring on the finger there aint no strings attached but if u love television and manic depression...uh sorry got carried away for a sec...um very good! ii dig it dude.. |
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