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» Poem: --Distant Whisper--
--Distant Whisper--
written by DaMaGeD
11:18 PM 3/20/05
People come and people go,
And when they're gone
You miss them so,
This you cant change,
You have no choice,
Listen to your heart,
You'll hear their vioce,
You think they left you
All alone,
But there is something
You dont know,
Just close your eyes,
No need to cry,
Cos they are standing,
Right by your side,
They are the flicker
In the corner of your eye,
That distant whisper
In your mind,
So dry your tears,
It will be o.k,
You cant have a rainbow
Without any rain,
You think the world
Tore you apart,
But they are forever
Inside your heart,
You dont know why
They went away,
But you'll be together
Again someday.


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-20-2005 - 11:55 PM)
thats reli beautiful....u reeli r talented..hope u keep writing x

by Stained_With_Life (3-21-2005 - 01:37 AM)
I wish I could write like that. Everything in your poem is great. The words you use rhyme or somehow go together, waht you say and all the methaphor and stuff are cool.

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