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» Poem: 60 Minutes, 9 Months, 3 Days
60 Minutes, 9 Months, 3 Days
written by xxLUSCiiUSZLiiPSZxx
02:41 AM 3/21/05
kissing is a habit
fucking is a game
boys get all the pleasure
girls get all the pain

he told you he loved you
and u believed that shit
but when ur stomach starts to swell
he says "to hell w/it"

60 mins. of pleasure
9 months of pain
3 days in the hospital
and a baby w/ no name

the father is a bastard
the mother is a whore
none of this wouldve ahppened
if the condom hadnt torn


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this was only posted because my friend said he'd like it, and so this is why this is here. ok, well...ok..

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» Comments / Feedback
by psychopathicmonkey (3-21-2005 - 02:46 AM)
nice one. n very true.

by just_nikki_21 (3-21-2005 - 02:49 AM)
very true...been there

by Stained_With_Life (3-21-2005 - 02:55 AM)
It's funny, and sad. And true.

by mentallydisturbed333 (3-21-2005 - 03:00 AM)
wow this poem is really great and it is very true

by (guest) (3-21-2005 - 03:18 AM)
Nice.. Very true..*ThumbsUp* -Marisa..*

by Complicated_Life (3-21-2005 - 03:24 AM)
WOW that poem is freakin tizzite!!! and it sends a great message on how inconsdiderate guys are... I LOVE IT!

by babi_afta (3-21-2005 - 03:56 AM)
I LUv THIZ PoeM IZ ONe O MUH fAVZ!~!~

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