» Poem: 60 Minutes, 9 Months, 3 Days |
60 Minutes, 9 Months, 3 Days
written by xxLUSCiiUSZLiiPSZxx02:41 AM 3/21/05kissing is a habit
fucking is a game
boys get all the pleasure
girls get all the pain
he told you he loved you
and u believed that shit
but when ur stomach starts to swell
he says "to hell w/it"
60 mins. of pleasure
9 months of pain
3 days in the hospital
and a baby w/ no name
the father is a bastard
the mother is a whore
none of this wouldve ahppened
if the condom hadnt torn |
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this was only posted because my friend said he'd like it, and so this is why this is here. ok, well...ok.. [ View xxLUSCiiUSZLiiPSZxx's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 143 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by psychopathicmonkey (3-21-2005 - 02:46 AM)
by just_nikki_21 (3-21-2005 - 02:49 AM)
by Stained_With_Life (3-21-2005 - 02:55 AM)
It's funny, and sad. And true. |
by mentallydisturbed333 (3-21-2005 - 03:00 AM)
wow this poem is really great and it is very true |
by (guest) (3-21-2005 - 03:18 AM)
Nice.. Very true..*ThumbsUp*
-Marisa..* |
by Complicated_Life (3-21-2005 - 03:24 AM)
WOW that poem is freakin tizzite!!! and it sends a great message on how inconsdiderate guys are... I LOVE IT! |
by babi_afta (3-21-2005 - 03:56 AM)
I LUv THIZ PoeM IZ ONe O MUH fAVZ!~!~ |
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