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misery´s argument
written by jude
04:31 AM 3/21/05
my crying is chocked ; i curl into a ball and clench,
an impossilbe shape
into our most intence union
the opposite feeling enters... disorder
the strangness of whats happening to me
tears dont stop but convulsions do
the more i need you, the stronger my desire
a defect in the movement of a tear
i swim through my tears to the back of my head to observe this
crying regular as a swimmers breath
in my bleak monotnous weeping
i wonder at the very terms of deaths argument :
that you are, my love is
you die, flesh is
it´s not pain or joy until wept out as fiery tears
that outburst casues a tooth of pleasure to bit hard
currents travel through me to the distance
when i finish crying
i am empy
withdraw my tears and i do not enjoy food, drink, or talk
there is no flavor until i weep again


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i know that i posted this before... but no one left any coments and this poem is important to me... i would like to know if its any good

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