» Poem: Why? |
Why?
written by AngelofDarkness211873906:40 AM 3/21/05when i look to tha sky
i cant help but wonder Why
Why we fell apart
Why im still here
so many questionz i need answered
and they all start with Why?
tha dayz grow long
as summer drawz near
these are my final dayz
then ill be gone for good again
but as i lay here every night
i still wonder Why?
Why we fell apart
Why this wont go away
Why im still here
so many questions i need answered
and they all start with Why? |
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itz a work in progress and just FYI i like 2 refer 2 myself as a singer/songwriter rather than poet [ View AngelofDarkness2118739's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 510 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by BrokenStarz (3-21-2005 - 06:50 AM)
Awww Puppy, it'z so sad...not like my shit isn't but that'z awesome. I love you! And nothing'z wrong with being a fucken poet...I juz so happen to be one! |
by XzXwatchXmeXBreakXzX (3-21-2005 - 07:00 AM)
well, your POEM is awesome, and I really enjoyed feeling the expression in your POETRY... And it's only a song if you've got a beat to it... so until that, it's just a depressing poem. |
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