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» Poem: Confusion
Confusion
written by Bloodsplattered_Fears
11:01 AM 3/21/05
Show me what to hope for,
something i dont wanna see.
the helplessness that clutches me close,
pulling me somewhere i dont wanna be.

Showing me belife,
making me hear.
but i can see the slavery,
all the fear.

Showing me,
making me see the fear.
Making me hear the voices,
whispering in my ear.

Never stopping,
everything going fast.
Never knowing what to think.
to confusing of a past.

Its hard to think,
easy to see.
hard to flee,
but way to easy to belive.

All the rooms,
all the doors,
all the traps,
all the floors.

Cant tell up or down,
side to side.
smile or frown.

Everything upside down.
Still showing me all these things,
they think its simple,
but my confusion sings.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
to hard to think...

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» Comments / Feedback
by dominicanan_bjbabe16 (3-21-2005 - 07:20 PM)
i love this poem. i hope you get to write a lot more.

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