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» Poem: This is how u've made me
This is how u've made me
written by (!IHateMyLife!)
01:14 PM 3/21/05
I cant believe u've got me so low,
You dont even see why i'm hurt,
I'm really trying hard to grow,
but you dont seem to revurt.

My life, it feels so cold,
sometimes i cant wait to die,
Your always acting big and bold,
then say u wont hurt a fly.

A happy ending is what i want,
but u always seem to prevent it,
You say i act all old and gaunt,
though at the time i've already spent it.

so now it's time to say goodbye,
I'm sick of u evil witch,
ur always complaining of "What am I?",
So i'll carry on bein a bitch!!


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by skpwf (3-21-2005 - 01:28 PM)
Wow...intense, but with great emotion!

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