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» Poem: she didnt know
she didnt know
written by raz0rblad3kiszes
09:23 PM 3/21/05
she didnt know how pretty she was,
she didnt know how liked she was,
she didnt know how popular she was,
we didnt know how bad she had it,
we didnt know how sad she was,
we didnt know she was headed downhill,
I didnt know i could help her I didnt know i could stop her,
I didnt know i couldve kept her from bleeding for all eternity
I didnt know...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i was really depressed and cutting alot so i decided to write this isnt one of my best but i a sure you that ill write better ones

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» Comments / Feedback
by Firesolved (3-21-2005 - 09:24 PM)
Hey any poem about self destruction is cool with me...I give it the thumbs up

by _razorblade_kisses_ (3-21-2005 - 09:41 PM)
nice name. and i liked your poem.

by gothkitty5 (3-21-2005 - 09:44 PM)
I thought your poem was great! Better than mine anyway.

by full_of_hatred (3-21-2005 - 10:43 PM)
Nice poem!

by lifelessangel (3-21-2005 - 11:13 PM)
kool

by NIRVANAGRL1994 (3-22-2005 - 07:38 AM)
wow this reminds me of my friend who use to stupid stuff

by raz0rblad3kiszes (3-28-2005 - 09:28 PM)
heys thanks alot i love yall's guys' support!

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